Sunday, October 10, 2010

Some avatars I developed for the story including another chapter :)

Cassius

Cassius Knightly

Ganadella Rosindry

Gwenevyre Rosindry

Shense

Thom Locke


 Chapter 2: The Greatest Barber in the World

Maman and Papa were so proud of their son, Shensé. He had taken the time to accessorize the place and make it his own--and what a shop it became. With the experience he had growing up watching Papa and the Barber he was well equipped to cut mustaches. But alas...how he desired to have one of his own. The summer blossoms had began to close for winter's icy chill also making business slow for Shensé. Many of his customers grew out their beards and mustaches to keep even warm. So, pacing the spacious shop he did. He did not know how many times he had counted the floor tiles or swept the same spot during the past hour of quiet and stillness. Then a crack of light poking the corner of his eye caught his attention...a room never touched.

"Hmph. Thought I got to every room..." he muttered entering in.

Shelves upon shelves of books aligned the walls as well as boxes filled with dusty framed tools and more books. Shensé's eyes glistened with excitement as he cautiously made his way in and over the boxes. A particularly vintage book spine caught his attention. It's faded green and gold detail somehow glistened under the light as Shensé picked it up and slowly blew on it.

“…The…Greatest Bar-ber…” he struggled to make out the words before noticing the poor picture of the earth under the title, “The Greatest Barber in the World! Gee, that’s pretty broad!”
 

Quickly he went to dissect the book for answers, but the small bell rang over the door as someone entered in. Half irritated at the timing, but part thrilled for a customer, Shensé tucked the book under his arm and closed the door behind him, assuring whoever entered that he was coming. Hastily, he placed the book within his traveling bag and briskly approached a stunning woman. She was just as fancy as Maman at her birthday dinners. He swallowed hard as her round cheeks formed a smile and rose hair tucked behind her pointed ears.

“Hello, sir. Are you by chance Shensé the local barber?”

Her voice was smooth as silk and accented so carefully…like a queen. Shensé nodded with an, “Uh huh”, as a response. “That I am. Might I ask who is concerned?”
 
She smirked and lightly bounced on her toes.

“I am.”

He tried to stop his smile and hide his blushing, but it was too apparent. She continued.

“My name is Ganadella Rosindry.” She held out her hand while Shensé shook it kindly. Her face scrunched up suddenly.

“Do you not know how to greet a lady?”

Shyly he nodded and placed his hands behind his back.

“Kissing a woman’s hand is disrespectful…for you I do not know and likewise. Looking a lady in her eyes is also rude…” he blushed and chuckled before finishing, “being that I don’t believe I want to marry at 15 years of age, mademoiselle.”
 

A sly smirk spread upon her lips as she crossed her arms.
 

“Well, aren’t you a peach. Let us see how mannerly you are when I’m finished with you, hm?”

“…pardon?”

She hung her cloak upon the hanger revealing a barbers apron and attire. He dropped his mouth as she practically took over, making up her station near the front desk.
 

“They did tell you I was coming, right?”

“…T-they? I am confused, Miss-“

“No! Ganadella…please…”

Shensé watched her move around as if busy. Had there been some confusion between them? Suddenly there was a shriek behind him, where he had found the empty room. Quickly, he sprinted to see Ganadella standing facing the shelf , holding her hand over her mouth.
 

“ What ails you?”

She shook her head sadly.

“It is gone..”

“What is?”

“My book! It was given to me by my great grandmother!”

He tapped his chin and felt an unsettling feeling. Reaching into his bag he pulled out the book and held it out to Ganadella.

“Do you mean this…book?”

With a pink face, she snatched it and scowled at Shensé.
 

“Thief! How dare you go through my things!”

“But…but I did not know—“

“Hasn’t anyone told you about The Greatest Barber in the World?? Hm??”

“Well, my Papa mentioned heroes of our time—"

“No, not heroes!” She sighed and bumped past him, caressing the book.
 

“I apologize for my ignorance…”
 

“No, no…I should not have been so mean. You are young and well…for future reference…leave that room be, please.”

Questions whirled in his head as she calmly placed the book on the desk and smiled.
 

“I feel you eyeing me…something wrong?”

“Well…um—not so much as wrong, but….who exactly are you?”

A long pause went by before she answered with a boisterous voice.

“I am Ganadella Rosindry! The Greatest Barber in the World!”



Welcome!

Salut, and welcome to my first actual blog!

Out of the many things to talk about or share with world, I thought it should be about one of my creations, The Majestic Mustache.
It happens to be a story I began writing for fun if not an inside joke about an avatar I made on Gaia (www.gaiaonline.com  for those who have never heard of it.) From there, it turned out to be a success with many of my friends, family, people who live in their parent's basement--yeah, you get the idea, haha. So, I thought, "Hey, would it not be neat to share this with more people?" I mean, what is there to lose? We all get a little shy about sharing our talents, but you have to start somewhere. Moving on, this story happens to be about a young boy who desires to be the best barber in the world like the local barber of their town. But with this comes the challenges of his greatest fears: the outside world. An adventure/comedy that I believe all ages would enjoy. Anyway, I intend on bringing more of my work on the site ('cause I gots a-LOT) if things go fairly well.

Thanks and enjoy!!





Chapter 1: The Story of The Mustache

Once upon a time, in a small delicate village lived a young, awkward lad with hair as red as a blood orange and eyes as clear as the Caribbean. His green suspenders buttoned over his white shirt. His small hands worked to put on the little white socks Papa had given him for his birthday.
Finally completing that adventure, he ventured his eyes to the shiny black shoes by the door in his room....oh dear, how he hated trying to put them on only to deal with the frustrations of tying the tiny string--for goodness sakes, he was only five! 

"Maman!"
 

He summoned his mother from the kitchen. Wearing her apron, she came to the door, her beautiful features very similar to the boy.

"Petit Shensé, what is it dear?"

He whined while poking out his bottom lip, " ....the shooooeeesss!" and pointed in their direction. She only sighed and went to grab them.

"Petit Shensé, this fear of the--"

"Nuu, I no’ scared….just…”, he huffs angrily as his body does the same.

“I understand little one” she giggles a little. “Come along. I have just finished breakfast.”

After breakfast, Shensé followed along with his father to the heart of the village to watch Papa buy provisions and go to the local barber, for Papa’s mustache needed trimming and “tickle bugs” cut. Shensé called them that because they were dark and tickled his cheek when Papa kissed him goodnight. So, in they went. As usual, Shensé sat upon the stool facing the barber and Papa to watch. The barber patted Shensé on the head as he hung Papa’s coat on the coat hanger. Excitement glistened in his eyes as the white cloak draped around Papa’s neck. Then began the magic of the cut. How the barber managed to get every hair clean off and leave Papa’s mustache untouched amazed Shensé. Papa always told him stories of great heroes with grand mustaches—blonde, noir, brown—like Papa’s—and even red! But has there been yet an adventurer with a mustache as majestic, he said.
 

So with that said, Shensé fantasized of having a perfect mustache of his own. He even pretended to have one with Papa.
 “I will grow one just as big as yours, Papa!”

But as the seasons went by and “Petit Shensé” was growing…his mustache was not. He began to believe that he did not have one. It was a sad day for Shensé and the aging Papa and Maman.
 
Summer dragged along, and it was Shensé’s 15th birthday. As a gift, Papa and Maman put together their earnings to buy the barber shop for Shensé to own. At first, he was saddened by the matter of not having a mustache to advertise, but Papa assured him that he would do just as good a service to provide grandeur grooming for mustaches all over the world.
 

With this…began a great adventure for Petit Shensé…..